Monday, March 2, 2009

a prueba de todo

I'm going to talk you abaot a man that was to survive because he was doing a work so he has to eat insects,snail and more to he can survive he also had to sleep in any place.He has a problem that was that he has that in the night it was very cold and in the day it was very warm so he had to take water from a river.He also had to survive af anything that can kill him.That its a video and a program that is in discovry channel.
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3 comments:

  1. Daniela AndradeMarch 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM

    hi sammy salami look you have some speling mistakes but the other thngs are perfect....

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  2. Santiago Bonivento.March 2, 2009 at 5:36 PM

    Sam, Nice text because is coherent and well structure.
    I have see the program and is very nice.
    You capitalize the letters adecuatley nevertheless you have some spelling mistakes.
    Nice text!!!!!!
    I couldt see your opinnion!! where is it?
    Congrats!

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  3. sacaMay 11, 2009 at 7:44 AM

    crrect spelling: has not was / of not af / don´t repeat so many times HE HAS.

    You can be more coherent.

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