Sunday, March 22, 2009

my legansy!!!!

when I'm young I want to be a lauyer and my legansy is to make or construct a place were poor people can stay there and have food,learn, and have fun in thre also poor people can stay to sleep.

6 comments:

  1. Hi samy i like your legacy, but I think it is too short and it is missing some details for it to be cohernet.
    att anama

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  2. I think your legancy is very interesting because you are talking about many important things that have to be doned

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  3. hi
    is short
    i know you can explin more and better
    i hope you acomplish

    bye
    continue writing

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  4. Sammy i think the text is little short you have some spelling mistakes ¡good!

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  6. Sam: Nice legacy but you had many, many spelling mistakes and it is difficult to understand. But I like a lot your legacy!!!

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